Hi,
I’m an aspiring graphic novelist working on a comic I hope will be groundbreaking for the Jewish world.
The story follows Jews living in an artificial shtetl in Israel’s Negev desert, forced into a reality TV show for Gentiles, while the younger generation sparks a spiritual revolution.
I’ve completed the script for the first issue but want to ensure the writing is solid before moving forward. Would you be open to helping me refine it? I’d be happy to pay for your time.
My vision is to translate this story into Hebrew and possibly Yiddish one day, making it a project that Jews of all ages (9-13 and up) can connect with. I want it to explore themes like teshuva, antisemitism, and Jewish resilience in the face of overwhelming odds.
I’m looking for an editor who can be honest and critical, pushing me to create the best comic possible.
Thank you so much for considering this! Best regards,
Ps I’m also looking for beta readers
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